Haunted house

Joedzy

Title: Haunted house

Characters: Malae John Cashis Joe

Setting: In G.I school

Problem:Cashis could not get out of the toilet.

Solution:Joe broke the door down with his fist

Conclusion: We got out happy because we were alive

Moral :Always keep together

One night there were four boys named Joe, Malae, Cashis and John. They had a plan to go see this school.  The school's name was Glen Innes school.  Glen Innes school was a haunted school.  These four boys did not believe it was haunted so they went to go see. When they got there

Cashis said “Let's split up”

Joe said “No stick together”.

After Joe and Cashis were talking Malae said

“Let's just go now”.

When we went the first thing we did was see if anything was behind us.  After checking we went to the corridor when we were in the corridor Cashis needed to go toilet.  When Cashis said he needed to go toilet Joe said

“yes we will come with you”,

Cashis said “no I can go by myself.”

When Cashis got into the toilet he said

“I’ll be back”.  

Joe said “Cashis we will be out the toilet waiting for you.”

Cashis said “No just go”,

Malae said “No we always stick together ”.

Cashis said “no I will not get out till yous carry on”.  

When Joe,Male and John left Cashis said Finally they gone.  When Cashis said that he saw a little girl that locked the door.

When Cashis saw her, he screamed

“Help Me”

While the others were laughing.

Then Joe said “sushhhhhhhh I can hear Cashis.”  

When Joe heard him scream he said “let's go now.”

When they arrived there Joe said “Malae open the door”,

Malae said “I can't it’s locked.”  

Then Joe decided to punch the door with his ultra strong fists.When the door broke down Cashis ran and said

“let's go now.”

When they got out Joe said “that's why always stick as a team.”